Wave – an Elfje Trio

Published October 29, 2012 by Libby

south
the direction
for migrating birds
thousands of thoughts flying
…dream

…dream
thousands of thoughts flying
wondering how visions
of night
flow…

flow…
from eyes
rapidly trembling, seeking
brief night reality – head
south

JP/davh

(Process notes: some dreams seem so very real. But then you wake.)

I love the inversion of the form in the second section of this trio, giving the impression of a wave.

You can read more of JulesPaige’s work at Jules Gemstone Pages and at http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com

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One comment on “Wave – an Elfje Trio

  • I knew this was Jules as soon as I started reading it – have read so much of her work now, that I recognise her very individual style.
    Dream capture is very well done and the ebbing and flowing of the stanzas works really well – nice one!

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