Leaf Fall

Published November 2, 2012 by Libby

(An inverted Elfje)

Leaf,
golden hued, escapes to
brief freedom flight
before down
fall.

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I have to thank JulesPaige for introducing me to this possibility as a variation to the form.

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7 comments on “Leaf Fall

  • Oh, my…I think my friends we will have to add many new forms to the ‘About and Elfje instructions’ section. I like this. I hadn’t thought of using the inverted form by itself!
    This is how we help each other poetically grow – Thank you both!

    Hugs, ~J

  • I almost like the inverted elfje better than the normal form! I really like this one – the way the first word catches your attention and then the shape of the other four lines mirrors the descent of the leaf.

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