Humid

Published June 8, 2012 by Libby

Humid
dripping sweat
temperature rising oppressively.
Susurration of the aircon:
Oasis.

Snellopy (http://snellopy.blogspot.com)

Snellopy is a teacher who has also encouraged his students in Viet-Nam to have a go at writing Elfje. Some of these have been submitted and will appear during the course of this week while I am away.

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2 comments on “Humid

  • The oppressive atmosphere of a humid day is so strongly expressed in such a small poem! I love it. The single word of the final line really comes across strongly, as well.

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