Smoke

Published April 1, 2012 by Libby

Grey
smoke rises
through cold air.
Around the hearth below,
warmth.

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One comment on “Smoke

  • I love the contrast between the first three lines and the last two lines: rises/below, cold/warmth, smoke/hearth; and the juxtaposition of the two dominant colours grey (air, coldness, darkness) and red (warmth, fire, intimacy)

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